SPIRIT WALK
Lynn Canyon, North Vancouver, B.C.
ISO 100 - F16 - 1.6 seconds
However, something about the previous version (#2) of this image didn't work for me. The tree to camera left, originally included for framing, felt like a distraction to me now. The new cropping (above) was intended to place the tree camera right to act as an asymmetrical anchor for the image whilst the 'spirits' walking diagonally across the frame towards the upper left created an upward energy vector i.e. movement in the photo. This gave a balanced dynamic that works for me.
The aspect ratio has been changed from 2x3 , native, to the classic 4x5 which somehow seems to add a contained feeling of volume and presence to some images. We feel like we could just walk into the scene. After cropping in Lightroom 5, clarity, vibrance, vignetting and sharpening were added to further enhance the luminosity and presence of the picture.
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