Your Weekly Writing Exercise
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My latest writing exercise to inspire and encourage your creativity.
December 4, 2020
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"Great content on this blog.
Great tips!"
"The only weekly blog I read--always great ideas and approach."
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Winter writing workshops on Zoom!
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I gained so much! Exactly what I needed to give me some direction in my writing.
--Zoom workshop student
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SOLD OUT--Waitlist only
Your Book Starts Here: Storyboarding Intensive
December 5, 11-5, $105.
Sponsored by The Loft Literary Center, Mps
Spend a lively afternoon on Zoom and create or refine a storyboard for your memoir, novel, or nonfiction book-in-progress. Learn about inner and outer story balance for your genre (key to publishing well), how to flow events, and the three different storyboards that eventually make up a book.
Mary has been teaching this workshop for 13 years and continually updates it to the new needs of publishing today. Packed with information and great exercises, plus the chance to connect with other book writers struggling with the same problems as you--and find ways to solve them.
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Coming in January
Strange Alchemy: How Character, Container, and Conflict Intersect in Your Writing
Sponsored by The Loft Literary Center, Mps
Details to come!
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Coming in February
Week-long Storyboarding Intensive and Writing/Revision Workshop on Zoom
February 8-12 2021
$850
Sponsored by Madeline Island School of the Arts
Join us for an inspiring, invigorating week-long writing intensive on Zoom.
Enjoy personal attention and coaching from Mary on your manuscript at any stage--from idea to revision--and daily craft workshops with our small and vibrant community. The week is designed to give you plenty of writing time and chances to create good writing friends to continue feedback.
Limited to 12 writers. Open to anyone writing a novel, memoir, or nonfiction book at any stage, from idea to revision.
Mary has taught this course for twelve years and her return students (often back to work on their next book) are proof of its fun and effectiveness.
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"Mary is engaging, encouraging, and really knows her stuff. I highly recommend her to anyone who needs help putting shape to their ideas."
—Katherine Ozment, author of Grace without God: The Search for Meaning, Purpose, and Belonging in a Secular Age (Publisher's Weekly Best Books, 2016)
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What are your writing goals for this coming year?
What do you most yearn to accomplish, learn, realize, discover?
- a super writing group
- a writing partner to exchange feedback
- an online class
- an agent or publisher
- time to write
- a great writing space where you have privacy to work without interruption
- more good ideas--if you're stuck
- a writing mentor or coach
- feedback from a professional editor
- good equipment--reliable computer or tablet, good printer
- a way to save work that's also reliable
- new software (like Scrivener?) and the skills to use it
As we usher out 2020 and welcome 2021, let yourself dream your new writing life into being.
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Reader comments or questions are welcome! Email me at Mary [at] marycarrollmoore [dot] com and I'll respond in a future posts. Your weekly writing exercise has been going since 2008 so lots of great ideas and inspiration in past posts. Check them out on my award-winning blog site.
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Planning a Brighter New Year for Your Writing Life--Are You Ready to Look Ahead?
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Hard to believe, but 2020 is almost behind us.
Quite the year. If your writing has benefited from the retreat of forced isolation, you're one of the fortunate ones. Others, I know, felt too flat with exhaustion and worry to nourish any creativity.
Looking back, it took me to midsummer to regain my stride. Changes in my work life from suddenly teaching on Zoom took vast amounts of learning and preparation time I hadn't planned for. I had to revamp all my class materials--not a bad thing, in the end. But it ate into my writing time.
I had to lean heavily on my writing partner and writer's group to get started again--we were all in similar places, so we helped each other.
I also received unexpected blessings this year. A supportive agent who likes (very much!) my new work-in-progress. Great companions on the journey. Wonderful students in my online classes. Healthy deadlines to meet.
I like thinking about these blessings, as well as the kickstart the harder experiences gave me. Sometimes, when we're against the wall, we get creative. We reach into our resources and find a way we wouldn't normally consider.
Recently a new book came out by one of my past clients, singer/songwriter Christine Kane. I had the pleasure of reading and rereading early drafts, helping her with suggestions and structure. Her book is The Soul-Sourced Entrepreneur, and although it's geared towards business owners who want to do it differently--not the trad competitive life but the intuitive soul-generated one--I found it very helpful as a writer.
Christine is a well-regarded coach for business owners, and who has to be more creative than someone in business during these times? As I worked on her book, I got to test many of her coaching exercises. One I still use is her Sunday Summit, which is a weekly review and preview. How did things go? What are you proud of, pleased with, ecstatic over? What didn't go that well? What might have you done differently? Her actual questions can be downloaded from her website. Her book is irreverent and insightful, definitely worth the read, even if you are not selling anything.
I resonated with the exercises because I've always enjoyed review and preview. This year, with covid scrambling the circuits, it's kept me focused on what I am going for with my writing life.
About seven years ago, I began doing this review and preview each December, as a way to assess the year and think about the next. I take myself through two steps, which are below. They're not easy, they can take time, but they result in clearer vision and more satisfaction.
Because satisfaction is often hard to come by. We don't pause and appreciate our writing lives. My post last week was all about this.
Sometimes I have to consult my writing friends, read back in my journal, or scan past months on my calendar to remember what I did--especially this year! And dreaming about 2021 took a bit of effort and time. Mostly because I get caught in the rapid squirrel cage of just meeting current deadlines.
It's a twist on new year's resolutions. Which I rarely keep. But these writing goals, I often do.
Here are the two steps.
Annual review
List five to seven things you've accomplished, learned, or realized with your writing this year.
Categories might include:
- Classes or workshops or conferences you attended and what you learned
- Feedback you received
- New ideas you tried
- Where you got stuck or realized something important
- Anything unexpected that happened with your writing
- What you changed about your writing habit or writing space or your permission to take time away from family/work to write
My 2020 review:
- I finished my revision of my new novel and got feedback on all chapters from my writing partner and half of the book (so far) from my writing group.
- I sent the first seven chapters to my agent and she was very happy with them, eager for more.
- I researched structure possibilities for three months by reading top-level literary fiction and studying it.
- I revamped the two characters' backgrounds and motivations with good results.
- I signed up for an online class on Scrivener and got more tools.
Now spend 5-10 minutes imagining how you'd like your writing to grow in 2021. What feels like a natural next step?
Questions you might ask yourself:
- What feels stuck right now? Do you need to abandon or reinvent any part of your project? What might rejuvenate your interest?
- Sometimes we get stuck because we are trying something new and we just don't have the skills yet to do it in a satisfying way. What skill(s) do you need, to take your project to the next step? Where might you get these skills?
- What support would you like for your writing this year, ideally?
- What changes do you need to make in your writing habit or writing space?
- What's one crazy idea you'd love to try, if you had the resources (time, money, childcare, energy, skill)?
Annual preview
Write down five to seven goals for 2021. These are rough ideas, what you know now, and they can be changed as you learn more.
My 2021 goals:
- Get my (new!) desktop computer working. Get help with what I can't troubleshoot.
- Finish revising the remaining 16 chapters of my novel.
- Workshop them with my writing group.
- Rework and send to my agent.
- Review her revision comments on the novel before this one. Brainstorm with my writing partner how to approach the tasks.
- Read like crazy. Best of novels?
- Get back into poetry for its brain-relaxing effect. Read a poem a day? Or download an app that delivers one?
- Take a break while the book manuscript is with my agent and sort through my file of unfinished short stories. Maybe take a short-story class to kick start?
Obviously, some of these goals are big ones. They'll need more planning, breaking into manageable steps. I've already started with the computer issue and found two possible helpers. I've set deadlines for sending revised chapters for the rest of the novel to my writing group.
I print out these goals or assemble a collage of inspiring images and draw them in or in some way make them visible, then they go on my writing office wall. In sight, in mind.
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Start with a big love of words, add a generous helping of Mary Carroll Moore,
mix with leavening from your peers, knead vigorously, and voila!
Your book has risen!"
--Eric Utne, founder of Utne Reader and author of Far-Out Man
"Since taking classes with you, I've tried a couple of work-shopping classes with other teachers. It's just not the same. I have not yet found anyone of your caliber.
"You are generous with your time, so thoughtful and insightful in knowing just what type of comments will move writers forward, and obviously knowledgeable about book structure. Whatever it is you are doing to create such a supportive online community is NOT the norm. No other online class I've taken has come close to creating the kind of support I've felt in your classes."
-L.B., Boston
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Mary Carroll Moore leads the aspiring author through every step of the challenging, rewarding process of developing and completing a full-length book.
--Rebecca McClanahan, author of In the Key of New York City
Photos by Allie Smith and
Hannah Grace, Upsplash
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More Posts on Book Writing Below and on My Award-Winning Website
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Fostering Gratitude for Your Writing in Uncertain Times
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Two of my private clients emailed me this week, saying they hated their books. I don't usually hear such strong statements, especially from experienced writers as these. But life, not just the books, had worn these two writers out. Family illness, the spread of covid, exhausting politics, and dread of winter combined with difficult revision tasks put them over the edge.
It wasn't that they really hated their books--I knew that, I'd read both manuscripts, and they were good ones.
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Wordsmithing the Heck out of Your Revision--Ten Steps to Make It Shine
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After the gathering stage, after the storyboarding and brainstorming your book's flow, after the first and tenth drafts are created, comes wordsmithing.
Wordsmithing is the final craft we book writers need to have in our toolbox. It's what makes the actual writing shine and sparkle.
Without the other steps, though, it's a wasted effort. I often think of it like putting curtains up on a framed house--window holes but no walls. The framing needs sheet rock, mudding and taping, sanding and painting, and glass in those windows, before the curtains go up.
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How to Send a Manuscript to an Agent--and What to Expect Once You Do
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If you've been writing like crazy during the past months of isolation, you may be ready to send your manuscript off to an agent or two in the new year. One of my long-time students is in that scary and exciting place, and she asked for any tips on how to go about it.
(I've written in many past blog posts about how to know if you're really ready. You can search for them on my blog if you want to read them again. Enter "manuscript" or "agent" in the search box.)
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Writing Real-Life Characters: How to Get to Know the People You Already Know
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I got an email from one of the students in my last online Afternoon Character Intensive. Since the workshop, he'd had a mini-breakthrough about his memoir--specifically the cast of characters he's trying to include. His mixed-up, even dangerous, family history means the players onstage are very individual, with quirks and tendencies. But he knew them so well, he'd not written that individuality onto the page.
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Editing-Writing-Storyboard Dance--When to Do Each One to Create the Best Book
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One of my past clients has been working hard on her memoir. She emailed me a few weeks ago with a good question about the best rhythm for book writers who are in revision. How do you know what's needed next--more editing, more writing, or the long view of a storyboard or charts? What are the signs that it's time for each of these all-important tasks?
I call it a dance. Ideally, there's a predictable flow between each activity, with markers along the way to tell you when to change partners.
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