The limitations to on-the-scene reporting caused by the pandemic have made scarce the details that enrich stories. The gemstones of journalism are there, but reporters must search harder for them.
Washington Post enterprise reporter
Jessica Contrera
and Indiana University professor and narrative editor for the USA Today network
Kelley Benham French
discussed how to mine for the right details during a virtual conversation Tuesday hosted by the National Press Club Journalism Institute. Both journalists have deep experience with narrative stories that show rather than tell with sparing but effective use of details.
The five senses are hard to use directly in reporting during this time of COVID-19, so French and Contrera advised reporters to enlist their sources to describe the details.
French imagined a story about a nurse coming home from the ER, being unable to hug her child and telling a reporter “It’s the hardest part of my day.”
“I’m just trying to take that generalization and break it into pieces and say, ‘How does it feel in your body when you can't hug your kid? What are the steps that you go through before you can help your kid? Explain it to me,’” she said. “It’s breaking that quote into like 500 pieces and then choosing the most important one.”
Contrera said in pre-COVID-19 times, she would simply follow a nurse into the ER. Now, she says she explains to them: “I would be there when you walk into a patient's room. I would be able to see everything you're seeing, smell everything you’re smelling, be able to watch the expressions on your face, on your patient’s face. And I can't do any of that. I need you to help me.”
She said she asks sources or the subjects of her stories how they are holding up before interviewing them. When they ask her in return, she gives them detailed, candid answers. “I think it’s important, right now especially ... to model vulnerability.”
Both suggested checking back with sources on the details that will appear in a story.
“We're not making them editors of our stories,” French said. “We're making them more aware of how they can help us tell their stories.”
Read on
to learn how to find the details that best tell a story, how to use them sparingly and how young journalists should seize the moment.